Saturday, May 29, 2010

Was I any Good?

"Was I any Good?"- I asked her.
She looked at me and smiled- "Your first time eh?".
I nodded.
"Hmmmm... well I usually don't reveal such stuff to my clients"
"Please... please tell me... I have to know."
"No kiddo... I can't... sorry".
She started toward the door. I got up, ran and blocked the way.
"What's this shit? You want me to call my guy?"
"Just tell me if I was good or not."
"You're wasting my time boy... in my profession, more than any, time is money and I'm not paid to give my judgement".
I took out a 100 and gave it to her. She took it and smiled.
She ruffled my hair and said- "you were absolutely fantastic boy!". Then she laughed and walked out.
Somehow I got the feeling that I'd been taken.


Rakesh Vanamali said...

Ahem! AJ..... I guess I can draw so many conclusions from this little dialogue! :)

But I prefer to call it a negotiation of sorts! :)

Vibushan L Narayan said...

what do i interpret of this? ;) :P

Unknown said...

all well that ends well

itsyvitsy said...

Liked the spontaneity with which the boy gave her 100 rupees. Other than that, I couldn't really make out much. I could owe it to a little dizziness due to cold! ;-)

sh..... said...

Sir!!! Please react something, before I make any conclusion out of this!!!
Cant stop to mention the post holds feelings!!

Just Someone said...

haha! :D nice one. :)

Ajai said...

This is a fictious piece about a young adamant and impatient man. He thinks he's done something great... but then he finds he's been taken for a ride. What I wanted to bring out was if we get too greedy or too arrogant that can be a big weakness.

The Literary Jewels said...

Hii Ajai..that was a thoughtful situation that you presented. Thanks God I read ur explanatory comment afterwards :)
So I was free to interpret it my way till then...keep writing!

Ajai said...

Thanks. :)

Dhanya said...

Wow. She accepted the 100 rupee note. :P She must be REALLY desperate for money. Nicely told Ajai :)

Me, Inside-Out!! said...

woah! Ajai... endless list of conclusions from this story of yours...

Ajai said...

He offered her 100... he was desperate for the answer! :P

endless! :)

Darshan Chande said...

Hehe.. Yeah, you have been taken!!

AJEYA RAO said...

Nice writeup. Well it drives several conclusions but what i liked the most was - What he thought was a special moment turned out as a business. :-)

Ajai said...


You have got it absolutely 100% right. Thank you. That's exactly what I was trying to convey.